I'm not sure why you are getting on OT for asking for clarification. I'll be honest, when I read the line "it seem to irritate some jamacains to see white women tooling around town in a rental" my mind first went to the "other" kind of rental as well. I actually had to go back and read it 3 or 4 times to try and figure out what you meant to say. If you had added the word car at the end of that line, it would have been much more clear. So, the fact that OT asked for clarification seems like a perfectly reasonable post. Sorry if I offend you to, but leaving out one simple word can completely change the meaning you are trying to convey. I'm sure it was clear in your mind but to the reader, it may not have been. It wasn't for me. And it wasn't accusatory either, the way you worded your post didn't necessarily mean it was YOUR rental - be it car or dread. Just remember, sometimes what's in our head doesn't always translate in what we write.
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rasta love...???? - oldtimer - 01-19-2012, 06:06 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - Schuttzie - 01-19-2012, 06:17 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - wit - 01-19-2012, 07:20 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - yamangurl - 01-19-2012, 11:21 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - rastagirl777 - 01-19-2012, 11:52 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - BrenJaLee - 01-19-2012, 02:15 PM
Re: rasta love...???? - wit - 01-19-2012, 03:27 PM
Re: rasta love...???? - rastagirl777 - 01-19-2012, 05:06 PM
Re: rasta love...???? - venusdemilos - 01-20-2012, 12:54 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - rastagirl777 - 01-20-2012, 08:49 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - wit - 01-20-2012, 10:51 AM
Re: rasta love...???? - BrenJaLee - 01-20-2012, 02:42 PM
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